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29 March 2011

IF YOU WERE MINE


Lovely woman, if you were mine, I would pour these jewels from my heart into your lap so my passion and love could glitter right before your pretty eyes.

You would feel the sweetness of my affection penetrating the very core of your soul with an overflow of faithful emotions while uniting two hearts as one under life's most powerful experience.

Darling, if I were an artist, the portrait of beautiful you would hang from the clouds, painted with my tears and dripping ink falling from the kingdom of the heavens for every eye to behold.

If you were mine, I would write for you letters of love expressing everything I am unable to say, as I gaze into your eyes to study the translation of kindness and passion buried deep inside your heart.

Beautiful woman, if only you were mine, then winter would feel like spring and the freedom of every blooming flower would bow before your presence bearing my fingerprints upon their stems while dancing  with the wind…like ballerinas in love.

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33 comments:

  1. Behold, thou art fair, my love; behold, thou art fair; thou hast doves' eyes.~ Song of Solomon

    Andy,This latest offering is as beautiful as the words written in the Song of Solomon.

    I just have to find a photo that illustrates this lovely line:

    Darling, if I were an artist, then the portrait of beautiful you would hang from the clouds, after being painted with my tears and dripping ink falling from the kingdom of the heavens, for every eye to behold.

    Thank you for such beautiful words tonight...

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  2. Ariana,
    Your continual support of my poems is always very much appreciated. Thank you for visiting.

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  3. Oh Andy, this poem speaks to the heart and the mind of the lonely woman. Within these words I feel you are unclothing your soul and speaking to those without love, or to the woman who knows you love her and is lucky enough to hear these words of passion and desire. You write..."If you were mine, I would write for you letters of love expressing everything I am unable to say, as I gaze into your eyes and study the translation of kindness and passion buried deep inside your heart." Many times people are able to write words they only wish they could say. Absolutely beautiful...keep writing.

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  4. This is such a nice one Andy!!

    So romantic.. Lovingly expressed. Who wouldn't want to be this woman?

    Ballerinas in Love- floating already!!

    You write so eloquently. Me loves this so much..

    Hugs xxx

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  5. Good morning Andy...such heart stopping words of desire. The phrase..."If you were mine, I would write for you letters of love expressing everything I am unable to say, as I gaze into your eyes and study the translation of kindness and passion buried deep inside your heart." WOW...This phrase is so often the case where a man or a woman cannot relay in person or by speech exactly how they feel, but are able to express their feelings on paper. POWERFUL. Keep them coming. Ruthi

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  6. Good day Olivia,
    Thank you for passing by again. Your words are always encouraging.



    My friend Ruthi,
    Thank you for writing. This poem was one that was way in my archives. I'm glad you are enjoying it

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  7. Lovely poem Andy. You express your love so well.

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  8. ballerinas in love...nice image to end on...a wonderful love poem speaking of desire andy...

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  9. Hello Brian Miller,
    Your feedback is always encouraging.



    Welcome Myrna R.
    I'm glad you like this poem. Thanks for stopping by.

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  10. aww - this is so romantic andy...the ballerinas in love..nice

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  11. Welcome Claudia,
    Nice of you to take the time to write. Glad you liked the poem.

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  12. That was an incredible piece of writing. Very powerful and I could visualize each piece you wrote. Look forward to coming back to see what you have.

    Thanks for commenting on my blog.

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  13. Thank you Lisa for your kind words, they were much appreciated.

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  14. It was very romantic! And I really believe that she was loved like this. And that is a very nice thought.

    Well done, Andy!

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  15. Welcome back chrisd,
    nice to see you again. I'm glad you liked this poem. I must admit, this is also one of my favorites. Thanks for the kind words and for stopping by.

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  16. A beautiful tribute to a woman of dreams...

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  17. Welcome Siddhartha,
    Thanks for stopping by. Your comment is much appreciated.

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  18. Dear Andy,
    Loved this so much..
    enchanting lines and awesome...
    Love,
    Hanan

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  19. Dear Andy,
    I love poetry and my sis is a poet too. her first book of poetry released a while ago. Please checkout her website if u can: www.sanarose.com
    Love,
    Hanan bint Alavi

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  20. Hello Hanan bint Alavi,
    Welcome. I am glad that you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for the link. I will indeed visit.

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  21. Thank you Madeleine for your kind words.

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  22. A beautiful collection of excellent written poetry Andy, your poems are special, so emotionally charged, it's just stunning...

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  23. Welcome, welcome eclipseofthemoon,
    I am always encouraged when my readers offer opinions & feedback...it helps me to improve.
    I am honored that you enjoy my poetry. Thank you.

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  24. Andy, this is so loving and gentle. It struck a chord.

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  25. Welcome to my poetry stories Catherine Mackie from so far away. I really appreciate your time and comments.

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  26. andy very good poem my wife and me like this a lot thank you for do this very interesting good luck alex

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  27. thank you andy for give me this site is very interesting my wife and i are very impres w your talent good luck alex

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  28. Hello Elixander,
    Thank you for the kind words. It was nice of you to stop by.

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  29. Hi Andy, This is so romantic but very sad. Beautifully written as I had the images in my mind.

    Nchic x

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  30. Dear Nina, many thanks for your kind words. I am most touched by your honesty.

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  31. Wow not just romantic but so expressive you're very talented!

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  32. Hello to new visitor Amanda Moore.
    Thank you for the kind words. I appreciate you stopping by and hope you will visit again.

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