The flesh my heart desires is hidden under your silken garments.
Make me dizzy from your breathless kisses and your tender touch.
Let me lie in the shadow of your love to find refreshment like a bird sheltering under the leaf of a tree from the heavy rain or scorching heat.
My darling, golden sand I will pour at your feet, only to have your jeweled footprints walking beside me in shinning brilliance.
When I first knocked at the door of your heart, you gave me friendship to drink and upon entering, you fed me with the gift of true love.
In return, I have allowed you to unlock my naked heart to see all of my love hidden inside.
When I close my eyes, I can still enjoy the touch of the breeze mixed with the incense of love and the fragrance of a flower sleeping in freedom.
I cannot blame the man who in his turbulent and elderly years will cry out for a woman like you to comfort him in his great loneliness, even though he knows his hope lies in a cry that might never be heard.
Beautiful maiden, I will give anything to be a humble man on bended knees who has the priceless privilege of kissing the back of your soft, gentle hand under the unkindness of the pouring rain without an umbrella.
Let me express love's meaning to you with words that will turn into music and then into a whisper of our never-ending song.
My darling, I love you with the song of life…I love you with the song of love.
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ReplyDeletelovely expreesion
ReplyDeleteMr Blaque
http://mrblaque78.wordpress.com/2011/09/26/fiery-one/
This is super beautiful ,
ReplyDeleteyour words are music to ears.
Andy,
ReplyDeleteI was so pleased to find your writing this evening. You have been missed.
I sincerely hope that you are making good progress in your recovery.
To find your charming words, does send a message as well that you must be feeling an improvement. To write with such a romantic heart, is so very special.
Take good care Andy,
Best wishes, Eileen :)
This is one romantic and lovely poem. thnaks for sharing :-)
ReplyDeleteAs always, a pleasure to read a beautiful love poem by Andy.
ReplyDeleteYou have written so well...i wish you must not stop writing ur blogs.
ReplyDeletethr r ppl who terribly wait to read ur romantic beautiful poems.
do read my poems section in
http://chitranavada.blogspot.com
Sweet and romantic as always ~
ReplyDeleteTruly beautiful... Loved it.. :)
ReplyDeleteand what a beautiful song you sing. Nice Andy. Hope you're feeling better.
ReplyDeletelovely! Any girl would love to be presented with this one!
ReplyDeleteHello Andy, that's of the best posts of that kind i've read..
ReplyDeletesweet expression that makes ur woman go crazyyy..:)
beautiful as always..hope andy is back with a bang to blogger :) really enjoyed it :) get well soon...
ReplyDeleteperfectly soothing.
ReplyDeletewell done.
Andy...I must admit, your words in this poem is like you never left. absolutely beautiful...keep on writing and we all will keep on reading for you bring to the reader a sense of love in this world.
ReplyDeletewe needed it, what a sweet treat.
ReplyDeletePehaps that should be the verse inside my "Kisses" Card... and like you said....who doesn't like kisses!
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by.
Hello friends.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the best wishes. It's good to be back with you all.
@ Mihir: Thanks for visiting.
@ Mr Blaque: Thanks for visiting & the link. I'll be sure to visit.
@ The Cello Strings: Thanks. I appreciate it.
@ Eileen: My dear Eileen, your words are most encouraging. My recovery is slow, but at least I'm writing again and that alone gives me some comfort. Thanks for visiting.
Thank you for the best wishes and messages. I truly appreciate them.
@ Grå Sky: Hello & welcome to my blog. I'm glad you enjoyed my poem. I hope you'll return again soon.
@ Marbles in My Pocket: Hello Charles. Nice to see you. I appreciate the visit and comment.
@ chitra: What a nice thing to say. I have indeed missed my blog friends and am happy to be back. Thanks for the link which I will visit too.
@ Heaven: Thanks.
@ Hanan: Hello Hanan. Always a pleasure to hear from you. Thanks for visiting.
@ Myrna: My dear Myrna, thank you for the well wishes. I'm doing much better. I appreciate your kind words.
@ Melissa: Hello & welcome to my blog. I appreciate the visit and comment. Hope you'll return again sometime soon.
@ Being Pramoda...: Smiling...you are most kind. Thank you for taking the time to visit.
@ Israr: Thanks for the well wishes. I'm easing my way back into blogging. Thanks for visiting. I appreciate it.
@ The Orange Tree: Hello & welcome. Thanks for visiting & commenting.
@ Ruthi: My dear Ruthi, so lovely to hear from you. Thanks for the kind words. I appreciate them very much. Hoping to speak with you soon, my friend.
@ Wanda: Smiling..kisses are nice and I couldn't agree with you more. Thanks for taking the time to visit.
I love the passion and emotion throughout this poem.
ReplyDelete❤My Dearest Pღet Friend,
ReplyDeleteI read your words a few days ago and was so touched by the intense emotions your words conveyed...
I am sitting here with tears freely flowing from the beauty you continue to create.
You are a gift.....you are a treasure.
I am so thankful you are writing again
But more than that, I am so "thankful" for you Andy...
Because you are back here...where you belong.
Sharing Love and Beauty. Lord knows our world needs more Love and passion...and you share it so sensually.
Once again you allow your readers to "feel" Love through what you have written. I recall you saying "you've yet to write your best poem"...well my friend...for me...this one is it.❤
Lღve & Blessings , Ariana
To Anthony: Hello & welcome to my blog.
ReplyDeleteThanks for visiting & commenting. It makes me happy that you can enjoy my poem.
Thanks also for following. I always try to return the kindness & will be by to visit your blog soon.
Hope you'll return again sometime.
To Ariana: My dear Ariana,
Thank you for the sweet sentiments. As always, they are most encouraging & uplift my spirits to continue writing the words that will continually touch your heart and those of my readers.
I greatly appreciate your visits and kind words. Am looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes, my friend.
Simply beautiful!! Love it! Very passionate! ... This is a pure poetic dance! She's a lucky darling! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing and for visiting my page--I'm humbled! :)
To kweschn: Thank you for such kind words. I also enjoyed your sensual entry.
ReplyDeleteYour visit & comments are much appreciated.
Beautiful!
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To benjity: Thanks Abby. I appreciate the visit.
ReplyDeleteLet me lie in the shadow of your love to find refreshment like a bird sheltering under the leaf of a tree from the heavy rain or scorching heat.
ReplyDeleteMan, that's just awesome! Some excellent imagery! Thank you for sharing this with me. Also, for visiting my blog, much appreciated. :)
Wow... truly beautiful.
ReplyDeleteEvery woman in the world needs a man that will write her a poem like this, and every man needs a woman like this to be his muse!
Perfect words of love.
A true beauty here
Andy u write such romantic poems....greatful will b women who s in ur life...
ReplyDeleteKeep writing n posting!
Beautifully written and expressed!
ReplyDeleteThe texture of your words is sooo rich..i enjoy it so much..
ReplyDeleteYour blog never ever disappoints me:)
Friends, I am truly moved by your comments.
ReplyDelete@ magicinthebackyard: You are most welcome and thank YOU for such warm sentiments. Much appreciated.
@ Aynsley: Thank you Aynsley. Your comments give me much encouragement to continue writing. Thanks for taking the time to stop by.
@ Mani: Thanks Mani. I appreciate the visit.
@ abthomas: Thanks. I appreciate you stopping by.
@ tarunima: Thank you for your kind words, Tarunima. You've been a great supporter of mine. It means a lot to me.
Beautiful, charming and heart-tugging. Simply gorgeous!
ReplyDeleteHello Clariice: Nice to see you again. I appreciate your comments. Thanks for taking the time to visit.
ReplyDeleteVery mature thoughts indeed !
ReplyDeleteHello Kremo.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to my blog. Thanks for stopping by.
You are melting a lot of women's hearts with this one. Oh to hear this recited with music softly playing.
ReplyDeleteA sweet treasure!
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To Tameka: You humble me with your praise. I sincerely thank you for taking the time to visit & comment. It means a lot.
ReplyDeleteLooking forward to the finale of "Look At My Fabulous Life".
See you soon!