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01 April 2012

Day 1: THE ATTRACTION...

For the first time ever, I'm taking part in the A-Z Challenge and NaPoWriMo, where I'll have to write a poem a day for the whole of April (26 in total for A-Z). I'm combining both challenges. This is my entry for Day 1 letter "A".



Sadly, because of life's circumstances, the attraction existing between us will never materialize in reality.

This forlorn heart of mine never knew such beauty as yours until I first saw your pretty face upon the pages of my humble work.

How I adore the stardust in your eyes revealing romantic gestures I only knew in lonesome fantasies.

Like a maiden who reaches for the emblem of passion for the first time, your lovely eyes pierce my soul so profoundly that I can actually feel your trembling touch.

The attraction between us is filled with unspoken words of romantic poetry that only lovers can hear in their midnight dreams.

My darling, you appear before me with invisible tears sitting in your eyes and when you disappear into infinity, your sweet fragrance is all that remains.

The attraction between us really is the most beautiful emotion life has ever bestowed upon my lonely soul.

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42 comments:

  1. Just awesome...pain,sadness, love,longing u have it all.

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    1. Dear Janaki,
      I have it all because you can read the unwritten words in my heart (smile). Thank you my sweet friend.

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  2. Good start on the a to z. god bless keep on writing

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    1. Dear Roy,
      As always, thank you for the visit and support. You are a good man.

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  3. Attraction can be bitter sweet. Well written. :)

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    1. Dear Jessica,
      I agree with you on attraction. It is still beautiful when you know someone feels the same way. Thank you for the compliment.

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  4. Lovely poem and thoughts, Andy. Attraction is so heady, it's like an altered state of consciousness! Good luck in taking on two challenges!

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    1. Dear Sweepyjean,
      Thank you for the comment. Words sometimes are so hard to describe what we feel. In any case, thank you for the kind words.

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  5. Beautiful - filled with longing and passion!

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    1. My friend Martha,
      Thank you for the sweet smile and compliment.

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  6. `I adore the stardust in your eyes...`,it is really beautiful Andy!It goes perfectly with the photo! Beautiful poetry my friend! Have a great week.

    Nelieta

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    1. Dearest Nelieta,
      I am sure there are also stardust in your eyes (smile). Thank you for the kind and encouraging words. See you soon.

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    1. Dear John,
      Thank you for the visit and kind words.

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  8. How beautiful Andy, so much emotion!!


    www.thesocialfrog.com

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    1. The Social Frog,
      You say the nicest things to my humble heart. Thank you very much.

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  9. Your poetry is amazing, I say this as a fellow poet. Your words touch places in the heart and soul that many do not journey to.

    Thank you so much for stopping by.

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    1. The Man Cave,
      Thank you very much for the kind words. They were appreciated.

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  10. Wow Wat lines " I adore the stardust in ur eyes"
    Wat better way To start.
    Temme who wouldn't like to get appreciated by u in ur words or atleast inspire.
    Wow Janaki :-)

    My darling , u appear before me Carefulwith invisible tears sitting in ur eyes.

    I would love to c visit my blog :-)

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    1. Dear Ankitha,
      You are so kind and sweet to me. Thank you again for the visit.

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  11. Taking on two challenges this month, that's dedication. I find myself attracted to 'Attraction.' I look forward to reading more.

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    1. Dear Forjenssake,
      You know I had to smile after your comment. Look forward to seeing you again. Thank you very much for the visit.

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  12. Beautiful and romantic poetry which tugs at the heartstrings and makes the eyes misty.

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    1. Dear Sulekkaha,
      Very nice comment from your heart. I am touched by your kindness. Thank you.

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  13. A lot of sadness in there---a great start to both challenges!

    Look forward to your challenge posts...
    --Damyanti, Co-host A to Z Challenge April 2012

    Twitter: @AprilA2Z
    #atozchallenge

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    1. Dear Damyanti,
      Love will always has a bit of sadness. Of course, the JOY can not be measured. Thank you for the visit.

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  14. How beautiful is this poem Andy and the image is just stunning! I want to bottle it!

    Denise

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    1. My friend Denise,
      There will always be an attraction that can not be revealed (smile). Thank you for the very sweet words.

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  15. How lovely, a great start to your challenges - you certainly don't like to take things easy hey?

    Hopped over from the A-Z Challenge.

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    1. Dear Stacey,
      To love is life's sweetest challenge. Thank you for the visit and kind words.

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    1. Dear Pinashpinash,
      Thank you for the visit and kind words. Hope to see you again soon.

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  17. Andy you are very brave to take on two challenges at once. But I'm certain you're going to ace them both as is evident in this poem filled such soulfulness and imagery!

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    1. My friend Corinne,
      Thank you for believing in me. I hope I will make your smile each time you visit. Your encouragement is very much appreciated from the very depth of my heart.

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  18. Joy and pain, love restrained, is still yet, love. So beautiful Andy. :-)

    http://lyricfire.typepad.com/lyric-fire/2012/04/lyric-fire-napowrimo-2012-day-2-giving-it-up.html

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    1. Dearest Tameka,
      Thank you once again for the kind words. You are a great support to this heart of mine.

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  19. Simply Beautiful, your words create feelings of gladness and sadness.

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    1. Dearest Ariana,
      Thank you for the kind sentiments. It is good to hear from you again. Looking forward to your visits and your smile.

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  20. Lovely piece... Well written.. ♥ ♥
    Best wishes for the A-Z challenge! :) Sounds great!

    I've been not home for a few days. Vacation and study leaved started. Really missed being in your blog. :(

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    1. My beautiful Hanan,
      Once again, thank you for all that you said before leaving for your studies. I will await your return with a smile. Safe travels dear friend.

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  21. Soft, romantic and beautiful...it touches your heart ! :)

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    1. Dear Kitty,
      Thank you for the visit and kind words. I am always happy when I can touch the reader's heart. Yes, I am most happy I could touch yours also (smile).

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