15 April 2012

Day 15 (NaPoWriMo): AN EVENING WITHOUT YOU

For the first time ever, I'm taking part in the A-Z Challenge and NaPoWriMo, where I'll have to write a poem a day for the whole of April (26 in total for A-Z). I'm combining both challenges. Sundays are writing days off for the A-Z Challenge (except for Day 1). This is my entry for NaPoWriMo Day 15 only.


My darling, an evening spent without you is impossible for this fragile heart of mine to bear.

Loving you has made my life so beautiful that each day I live, I have a better understanding of the principles of heaven from right here on earth.

Walk with me among the pyramids of time and permit me to decorate your gorgeous image with the flowers in my heart.

The sweet imprint of your last kiss, although invisible to the naked eye, has left its beauty upon my lips.

An evening without you, my love, is like facing a brand new day with no purpose, responsibilities or desires.

How can I fall asleep knowing your soft, silky hand will not be in mine like it was every other night before?

Lady flower, this evening without you has left a void in my heart that needs only your sweet, bashful smile to make it whole again.


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26 comments:

  1. nice poem...waiting for love and feeling that void... said so much in these few lines:)

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    1. Dear Elvira,
      As always, thank you for being so kind to my humble soul. I can always depend on you to make me smile.

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  2. You never cease to amaze me with your words.

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    1. My precious Janaki,
      What good is any evening unless it is spent with beautiful you (smile). You so sooooo good to my heart. Thank you very much.

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  3. Pangs of separation can be felt in your poem, hauntingly sad.

    http://sulekharawat.com/2012/04/15/milestone-or-tombstone/

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    1. Dearest Sulekkha,
      You say such nice things about my work. I only write what I feel as I listen to the GREAT, GREAT Mukesh.

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  4. Hi Andy. It's early morning and I should be sleeping but I'm not. Thanks for your comments on my two posts. I value your opinions.

    Now I adore this poem of yours. It shows a great depth of love for Lady Flower, how even one night apart brings pain.

    Denise

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    1. Dearest Denise,
      Thank you for writing. Yes, one night away from the one you want and love can be very hard. Thank you for returning with such beautiful words (smile).

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  5. The passion here is breathtaking. Wonderful, Andy!

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    1. My dear SweepyJean,
      You are so kind to me. Thank you for being so good to me in every sense of the word.

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  6. "An evening without you, my love, is like facing a brand new day with no purpose"....
    loved it a lot :)

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    1. Dear Anshul,
      Thank you for the visit. You inspire me with your kindness.

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  7. Awwww, but the first kiss upon return is so great! Travel safe Andy. :)

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    1. Dear Rachel,
      Yes, the first case upon a lover's return is so sweet (smile). Thank you for the visit and kind words.

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  8. beautiful poem andy sir.. an evening without you .. i am sure it feels like a life time

    all the best with the contest


    Bikram's

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    1. Dear Bikram,
      Its good to see you again. Thank you for the visit and encouragement.

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  9. lovely :) this post of urs made me teary eyed

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    1. Dear Udita,
      Your teary eyes gave more beauty to my simple poem. Thank you so much for the heartfelt sentiments.

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  10. Parting is such sweet sorrow...if only for an evening!

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    1. My dear Corinne,
      Yes, to be away from the one you love can be painful at times. Thank you for stopping by again.

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  11. The feeling of a missing lover is presented perfectly here. No one should ever feel this!

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    1. Dear Tameka,
      Sometimes this kind of sadness comes into our hearts. Sometimes it never leaves. Thank you dear friend.

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  12. Oh it's the same feelings for a man to be lonely without his loved one. It's an anguish I can relate with. It's like losing a part of you even for just one night.

    I'm beginning to miss someone...

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    1. Dear Melissa,
      Great words from you once again. I am touched that you enjoyed the poem so much.

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  13. My dear Andy,
    A beautiful, breathtaking and heartfelt write. ♥ Nice...

    How are you? I always think about you and how you are.
    I've been away from blogging for some time.
    My university exams are nearing so I don't get much time to spent on computer. I miss being here. I'll come here to read your works whenever I can. Keep in touch. Take care... ♥

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    1. My beautiful Hanan,
      Your studies are first. I know you will do well. Thank you for the kind and moving words. I am fine and doing very well myself. Thank you for asking. I am a quiet man who just loves writing about the beauty of the heart while listening to MY MUKESH. As always, I will look forward to your smile in the future. Thank you very, very much and take care of yourself.

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