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11 July 2012

H is for: UNFOLD MY HEART


So sacred is your gorgeous presence that I can actually feel your beautiful shadow touching me with love under the splendor of the sun.

Your name remains upon my lips, for I find myself whispering it among the flames of a fire started by the raindrops of passion.

Even the melody of your bangles in my ears leaves a divine sound much sweeter than ringing bells in a house of worship.

My darling, you have taught me to appreciate the lamp of knowledge shining within the heart that adores the gift of wisdom.

Amidst all of my misery and tribulations, you were always there to offer me comfort by letting my soul rest in the cradle of your loving arms.

Lady Flower, unfold my heart and you will find unpublished poems of love that were written with tears for only you.

Unfold my heart and you will also find the commandments of love bearing your name among the greatest words ever penned by this unknown poet.

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62 comments:

  1. Andy, this sounds like some of the writings of King Solomon recorded in the "Song of Solomon" in the Bible!

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    1. Dear Esther,
      Thank you for the kind compliment. I am touched by your precious words. I am most grateful for them. Thanks for stopping by.

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  2. Andy, I love the repetition of 'Unfold my heart...' True love means giving comfort when needed. Beautiful.
    And beautiful Andy my friend that you're going to try to do our RFW Greener Pastures challenge. Don't try to follow all the guidelines. For your type of poetry you'll get yourself flummoxed.

    Denise

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    1. My dear Denise,
      Thank you for the kind words and yes, I will be giving the theme for RFW a try this week. I just don't see myself as a story teller, but will certainly try (smile). Thanking you as always.

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  3. Beautiful words again. Love them.

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    1. My very lovely Nargis,
      You make my poetry beautiful because of your eyes (smile). Thank you so much my dear and sweet friend.

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    2. My BEAUTIFUL Nargis,
      I have come to LOVE your sultry eyes more every time my reflection appear in them....

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  4. A beautiful poem Andy.

    .......dhole

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    1. Dear Donna,
      Thank you for the visit and kind words. I appreciate them very much.

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  5. Andy, lovely poem, particularly the second sentence, just gorgeous.

    Returning the visit from A-Z.

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    1. Dear Anita,
      Nice name (smile). Thank you very much for the lovely remarks. I hope you will visit again soon.

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  6. The words every woman wants to hear. These words are music to a woman's ears, Andy. <3 :-)

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    1. My dear Irene,
      It is always very nice to hear from you. It is even nicer when you say things like that (smile). Many thanks for the kind and warm sentiments.

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  7. Dear friend : it´s late now, but It isn´t late to come and read you. I am even working, but I´m not tired to enjoy each word you wrote. Great, kiss Elen

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    1. My dearest Elen,
      Very sweet and tender words from you my friend. You have touched my heart with your sincere kindness. Kiss back to you also (smile).

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    1. Dear VBR,
      Thank you for the visit and for the compliment.

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    1. Dear Debra,
      I do appreciate the visit and lovely words. My heart is most grateful.

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  10. hmmmmmmmmm Love .. beautiful poem sir.


    Bikram's

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    1. Dear Bikramjit,
      As always, I thank you for the kind words and for the friendly visit my friend.

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  11. This is terrific Andy. I'm always impressed with the awe that comes through in your poems. It goes beyond
    the idea of romance and approaches that of devotion. Lovely.

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    1. My sweet Myrna,
      Once again you touch me with your sweet and kind words. You know I write from deep emotions...it is really all that I am. Thank you again my sweet friend.

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  12. now without unfolding ur heart i can say its filled with love n romance....:))

    keep them coming Andy Saheb...:)

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    1. My friend Irfanuddin,
      Many thanks for those lovely sentiments. My heart is soul is most grateful.

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  13. unfold my heart and you will find unpublished poems of love....
    Oh how you can write, dear Andy!

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    1. Lovely Margaret,
      Many thanks to you for those warm and kind remarks. My humble poetry comes from deep within my loving heart. Thank you again and again.

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  14. Oh Andy, your poems are just getting better and better! Beautiful!!!!

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    1. My dear and sweet Nelieta,
      Beautiful words from your loving heart to mine. Thank you so much for the compliment. I am always grateful to hear from you my friend(smile).

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  15. Hlovely, Andy! Hlovely. (heehee, it's not a typo..if you visit, you'll know) ;)

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    1. My dear Anita,
      You are soooooo FUNNY!!! I did visit and understood clearly (LOL)!! Thanks for the visit here and for the kind words.

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    1. My brother Ashok,
      Thank you for stopping by and supporting me with your kindness.

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  17. Another heart felt work of love....your words are origami set to prose♫

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    1. Dear Lumkazmierczak,
      Thank you for the beautiful words. It is always a pleasure to hear from you my friend.

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  18. I just love the lady flower part.. it's signature!! Another really beautiful poem that speaks volume..

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    1. Dearest Crystal,
      You do know by now that I also think you as a Lady Flower (smile). Thank you once again for the visit and kind words. Hope all is well with your son.

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  19. The heart holds so many secrets that sometimes I wonder how is it still beating? Lovely poem, Andy..Romantic...

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    1. Dear Sulekkha,
      Your words hold so many truths. Thank you for the compliment and sincere kindness my friend.

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  20. Very beautiful, Andy. I can imagine this woman so beautiful, so wise but in a way maybe not many could ever notice.

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    1. Dear Brocha,
      The heart of a woman along with her wisdom is by far more beautiful than her image. Thank you for the kind words. I appreciate each one of them.

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  21. It melts the heart of a woman! Lovely lines! :)

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    1. My dear Balqis,
      As always, you say the sweetest things to this humble poet. Thank you so much my dear friend.

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  22. Beautiful poem, ;unfold my heart' seems to have stuck with me. Lovely post.

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    1. Dear Rum-Punch Drunk,
      Thank you so much for the visit and lovely remarks. They will also stick with me throughout the day (smile). Thank you again.

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  23. "unfold my heart and you will find unpublished poems of love..."

    Really nice, Andy.

    =)

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    1. Dear Sue,
      Thank you for the warm sentiments my friend. I am much grateful.

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  24. Hi Andy
    gosh, the beauty of your words can move even the hardest hearts and uplift the souls of the lonely.Which lady therefore not secretly hope that your words are for her. *smiles* Thank you for being you my friend...

    Angie

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    1. Beautiful Angie,
      Very moving and humble words from you. I always enjoy your visits my friend. I am most thankful for your friendship, affection and kindness. Thank you so much.

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  25. Remembering each and every detail...a spectacle of Love. That's the essences. Poet like you are one in a million. Yes, like the Songs of Solomon.

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    1. Dear FherYmas,
      Thanks so much for the lovely words. I am humbled and touched.

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  26. Hi, Andy! ~

    I especially love this: "...the melody of your bracelets in my ears..." So sensuous -- I can hear it!

    Great graphic -- illustrates this piece perfectly!

    Thank you for sharing! XO

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    1. Dear Linda,
      Always a treat for me to hear from you (smile). Thank you so much for the warm and sentiments.

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  27. How beautiful - how elegant.

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    1. Dear Pondside,
      Many thanks for your beautiful remarks. I am most grateful.

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  28. My dear Andy...I always know where I can come to warm my heart ♥ Your words melt away the worries and everyday stress, allowing one to appreciate what is truly precious in their life. Thank you!

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    1. My dear Mary,
      Beautiful words from you my friend. My heart and soul is touched. Your written thoughts was indeed heartfelt. Thank you very much my friend.

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    1. Dear Cheryl,
      Thank you so much for the visit and kind words. They were greatly appreciated.

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  30. You.
    Are.
    Spectacular!

    Love your words! Love the animated illustration this week!

    Love the fact that you wear your heart on your sleeve and share it with us!

    Thank you Andy.

    You always warm my heart!

    A+

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    1. My sweet Jenny,
      I was inspired by YOU when I wrote that poem (smile). Thank you for saying the sweetest things to this humble poet. You are a great friend indeed.

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