The lips of a sleeping rose gently brushed mine during an enchanting evening with a beautiful maiden.
With a touch of playful grace,
she allowed the veil hiding her pretty face to slip so I could peer into her
romantic eyes of freedom.
Even her feet were decorated in
jewelry as she walked towards me magically, leaving behind golden dust as a
reminder of how fortunate I was to be in her presence.
When my heart took possession of
her beauty, my spirit was transported into the most passionate realms of sweet
love.
Overcome with emotion, I could
only imagine what one single teardrop from her heart might represent in a moment
of compassion or forgiveness.
This magnificent evening turned
into a heavenly bliss when the kisses shared between us left me breathless and
spellbound…just like the lips of a sleeping rose.
Written by/copyright Andy David © 2010-present
*Image from fanpop.com
Hi Andy!
ReplyDeleteThis was truly magical. I loved it all, especially the last line.
Hope you're doing wonderfully well.
Denise
Dear Denise,
DeleteAs always, I thank you very much for all the support and encouragement. Hope you are also doing well as I am.
I want to leave behind gold dust when I walk...any suggestions? (Giggle) Beautiful and enchanting as ever.
ReplyDeleteDear Liz,
DeleteI had to smile at your comment. Thanks for the visit and kindness.
Hi Andy,
ReplyDeleteit seems,like Romance is in the air,Andy
Dear Gunjan,
DeleteRomance is always dancing under the wind. Thanks for stopping by. I am most grateful.
title is so beautiful along with the lines that follows :)
ReplyDeletelovely read
Dear Jyoti,
DeleteYou are most kind and I am so very grateful for your warm sentiments. Thank you so much.
Truly sublime, magical & enchanting !
ReplyDeleteDear Ram,
DeleteI can always count on you to say nice things. Thank you very much sir.
It's so beautifully written. I really enjoy this poem and wish for its continuation . You never fail to amaze me, Andy. :)
ReplyDeleteDear Balqis,
DeleteThank you for being so honest and kind to my humble work. I hope I can always make you smile.
Hello Andy,
ReplyDeleteHappy to see you back and in marvellous form. Trust all is fine at your end.
Regards,
Nilanjana
Dear Nilanjana,
DeleteIt is very nice to hear from you. I am touched by your kindness and honesty. Thank you so much.
I remember this one. It's such a romantic image - the kiss of a sleeping rose. I'm glad you're posting once in a while. I can't help but wonder if you're still writing, if you're well. No matter, I send you my love and best wishes.
ReplyDeleteDear Myrna,
DeleteBest wishes to you also. I am still writing but not as much as before. I am grateful for the warm sentiments and the very big smile.
Andy, only when I visit, I realise how I have missed coming here, reading your love-soaked verse and listening to soulful music.
ReplyDeleteGosh, Andy, where have you been? Hope all is well with you.
Take care. Sending you love and smiles across ether.
Joy always,
Susan
Dear Susan,
DeleteThank you so much for those very nice words. I am grateful for the visit and encouragement. Wishing you well always.
Good to hear your voice again, Andy. Loved the poem as usual especially the last line... "just like the lips of a sleeping rose." This carries a lot of imagery, emotion and passion.
ReplyDeleteHope all is well.
Dear Anne,
DeleteAs always, thank you so very much for the kind words. I am grateful for the encouragement.
Hey Andy,
ReplyDeleteits feels so good to have you back :)
Hope all is good with you.
As always lovely words from you, a thoroughly enjoyable read.
Take care
Dear Me,
DeleteAll is well with me and hope all is well with you also. Thank you so much for stopping by and sharing your humble thoughts.
With a touch of playful grace - I absolutely loved that line. Good to read your romantic prose again.
ReplyDeleteDear Suzy,
DeleteThank you very much for your warm sentiments. Please know they were greatly appreciated.